In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
There is a widespread phenomenon that after all the improvements made in agriculture,
significant
number of individuals globally are without food. Add an article
a significant
This
essay shall outline the cardinal reasons and profess a suitable solutions
to Correct the article-noun agreement
suitable solutions
a suitable solution
this
situation after which a meaningful conclusion shall be made.
First
of all, lack
of Correct article usage
the lack
personnel’s
to work in the sector is one of the enormous Change noun form
personnel
reason
contributing to famine globally. A lot of youths after graduation want to sit in the offices and work rather than Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
to
be on the farms. Fix the infinitive
apply
Therefore
there is nobody to operate the sophisticated machines and so the few farmers do it to feed their families and not on commercial
basis. Add an article
a commercial
Also
, lack
of technical Correct article usage
the lack
know how
to use these machines Add a hyphen
know-how
account
for Correct subject-verb agreement
accounts
this
. Most of these equipments
Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
are
manufactured in Correct subject-verb agreement
is
the
foreign countries and when imported, some do not come with Correct article usage
apply
its
manuals and even those that have it too can not be read and understood because it is written in a different language. Correct pronoun usage
their
As a result
, it decreases the quantity to be produced causing famine.For example
, it was reported that quite a lot of equipments
brought in from China to help Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
boast
the rice plantation farm in Correct your spelling
boost
Temale
has been abandoned for the past two years due to the Correct your spelling
Temple
non availability
of personnel to manage it.
In terms of solution, the government should make the agriculture department attractive for the youngsters so that majority will be willing to work there after school to handle the new Add a hyphen
non-availability
equipments
brought in with their knowledge and skills. Again, transporters of farming items should ensure that how to use the things are attached to it and is Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
also
written in different languages so that it
can be used without them. Availability of these incentives and manuals will help increase productivity which will reduce hunger.Correct pronoun usage
they
For instance
, since it was announced at the national food day celebration that graduate’s
entering the agriculture sector would be given a car and accommodation, the workforce has increased as well as local rice production from 5% to 20%.
In conclusion, after considering the core reasons and associated solutions, I will Change noun form
graduates
therefore
suggest that the government should motivate the educated young ones to take up farming.Submitted by agozie2018 on
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