Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It has been argued that
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have different views about our reaction to facing a bad
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as an unsatisfying career or not having enough money. While some
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believe that the best way is to accept that, I hold the view that we should try hard to improve that.
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with, some
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think that admitting an issue is the best measure that can be taken when we encounter it. From their point of view, some
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are out of our control. Indeed, a number of issues can not be solved
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we spend a lot of time and energy on them. By way of example, high unemployment rate, job unsatisfactions and indeed money shortage are because of recession and inflation in a country.
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, if
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try hard to overcome difficulties in making money, they may not gain fruitful results, because most of these
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just can be eradicated by authorities and government officials not
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themselves.
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spite of that, there are those, including myself, who subscribe to the view that accepting a bad
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can mostly be destructive. They assume that trying to boost a
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even though can not wholly be successful, would prevent
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severe issues.
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, if
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on board in a company do not focus on challenging
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and find a viable strategy to solve them, they may lose
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company entirely. In my opinion,
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some
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seem to be insoluble, we should dedicate time and effort to
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them even if be fruitless. In fact, doing nothing and watching the deterioration of bad situations in our life is likely to affect us mentally.
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, the sense of lacking the ability to fight with them may make us frustrated and depressed. In conclusion, both ideas about dealing with a bad
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can be acceptable under certain circumstances, having said that I believe that we should do our best to tackle a different challenge in our life because it not only can prevent other bad happenings but
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helps us prevention of developing mental disorders.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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