You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home, you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager and explain what happened. Describe the watch and ask them to help you find it.

Dear Mr Manager, I am writing to request assistance regarding my missing watch.
Last
weekend, from July 25-July 28, I stayed at the Marriot Hotel in room 601. When I checked out, I had always thought that my watch was in my bag the whole time,
however
, just today, I realized it was missing. The
last
time I remembered, it was on the side table on the left side of the bed, and I must have forgotten to pack it. It was a silver Citizen watch with a gold lock.
Also
, it has my initials, GJ, engraved on the back. As it is valuable to me, could you please check if it is still there or if someone already found it? I am willing to give a reward to the one that could return it. If you have any
further
information about it, please feel free to contact me anytime at 070-1234-5678 or [email protected]. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you. Yours sincerely, Gavin Jackson
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