fatherhood ought to be emphasized as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is thought that
females
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are only accountable for deciding whether or not to have babies as they have a lot of importance in child upbringing.
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, with due respect, I would disagree with the argument.
First
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,
females
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in today's
world
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are trying to keep pace in the modern
world
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along with men.
In addition
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, fathers along with mothers are equally responsible for bringing
children
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up. In today's
world
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along with males,
females
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are
also
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trying to keep pace with the rest of the
world
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. To illustrate, they are achieving so much education that now to earn a two-square meal, they have to go outside along with their male counterparts.
As a result
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, most
women
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are working professionals who cannot solely look after
children
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.
Therefore
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, a woman must need help in looking after babies as in the earlier phase of their life minus -ones are the most tender ones needed to be taken care of. Being a workaholic mother,
that is
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why they needed to be supported by her husband.
For example
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, in European countries both males and
females
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are equally nurturing offspring, indifferent to gender biases, whereas in the other Southeast Asian counties, in most cases, it is
women
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to whom every sort of person is responsible for everything.
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, because of biological reasons fathers are equally responsible to look after their
children
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. A
father
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can not deny that the child is the sign of the
responsibility
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shared by both. A
father
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cannot deny that he has
also
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taken marital vows to look after
children
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equally along with
women
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. As he is the sole breadwinner,
that is
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why he cannot flee away from his duties.
Hence
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, he should be sharing
responsibility
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wisely
in addition
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with
women
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in looking after a child.
For instance
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, the best example could be the U.S.A, where
Father
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's
responsibility
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is to look after the
children
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along with the mother. Of course, opponents say a female can take care of
children
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more wisely but
that is
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not true in all cases as
father
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and mother both share equal
responsibility
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. in conclusion,
although
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, a female brings
children
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into the
world
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, it is the equal
responsibility
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of the man as
females
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are working outside and for biological reasons, males are equally responsible.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Equal Parenting
  • 2. Gender Roles
  • 3. Societal Expectations
  • 4. Emotional Well-being
  • 5. Psychological Development
  • 6. Legal Frameworks
  • 7. Workplace Policies
  • 8. Gender Equality
  • 9. Traditional Responsibilities
  • 10. Active Fatherhood
  • 11. Balanced Development
  • 12. Undue Burden
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