A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be a suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter - tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves - say why you think the job would be suitable for him/ her - explain how to apply for the job

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to convey good news regarding a job opportunity in Sri Lanka

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you were expecting for a longer period. The vacancy is for an Associate ERP Consultant at DMS Software Technologies Pvt Ltd.

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will be interesting employment because it is not a routine job. Tasks involved were listed as requirement gathering, conducting user training, preparing user manuals, client handling, go-live support etc.

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, you will be able to act as a Project Manager if you're performing well in two years' time. I think it will be an ideal opportunity since you're having the required skill with your MIS bachelor's degree.

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to that, it's a well-paid occupation with industry exposure. You'll get the opportunity to deal with the senior management of companies enabling you to enhance your contacts. The application process seems to be very convenient as per the website advertisement. You only need to send a copy of your latest CV to their company email address which is [email protected]. I wish you all the best for the interview and I am waiting for a piece of good news about

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. With love,

Thulya

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Thuya

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

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