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Band 7.5

You have recently noticed and increase in traffic in your residential area. Write a letter to the responsible person at the local council to inform him about the problem and say - Introduce yourself and describe the problem - What are the reasons for the traffic in your view - Suggest a solution to the problem.

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Dear Mr Jackson, I am writing to inform you regarding the current traffic issue in the Chasewood area. My name is Glenda Bay, and I am currently residing
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 635 5th Street Chasewood Avenue. Recently, every time I drove home from work, I noticed that traffic was getting worse. Before it would only take me 30 minutes to arrive at my house,
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 now, it would take an hour or so. It is apparent that
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 the increasing number of vehicles on the street, the majority of which are trucks
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 the factory down the road. To mitigate
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 problem, I was thinking about whether it is possible to ban these large vehicles from entering
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 part of town during rush hours. I think the factory can make an arrangement to reschedule their deliveries at any time of the day. If you have any questions or if there is any development about
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, please feel free to contact me anytime at 070-1234-5678 or [email protected]. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you. Yours sincerely. Glenda Bay

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Consider elaborating slightly more on how the increase in traffic specifically impacts the residents and the environment in the area. This will provide even greater clarity and depth to your description of the problem.
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While your suggestions for solutions are good, offering additional possible solutions may give a more well-rounded response. For instance, proposing a collaborative meeting between the council, factory representatives, and residents could be beneficial.
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The letter addresses all required points: introducing yourself, describing the problem, explaining reasons, and suggesting a solution.
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The structure of the letter is logical and easy to follow, ensuring clarity and coherence.
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Your greeting and closing are polite and appropriate, in line with formal correspondence.
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