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Police in some countries like England don't carry guns. Some people don't approve of this because they think that police with guns gives them security. Others think that police carrying guns decreases crimes. What is your opinion? Give relevant examples and experiences.

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A section of society holds a belief that the crime rates can be mitigated provided that
police
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 bring along their
guns
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 with them.
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, some folks opine that
guns
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 will ensure the
police
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's safety from time to time. In my opinion,
guns
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 are a vital weapon for the
police
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,
similarly
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 to other defence weapons. On the one hand, there are numerous criminal cases happening around the world and most of which could lead to death.
Police
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 need to always assure the citizen's safety is put in
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 place rather than other matters.
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, the authorities chiefly, the
police
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 cannot turn a blind eye to
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 matter as they opine that it is not imperative at all.
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,
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 will be utilitarian for the
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 in menacing circumstances. These
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 things cannot be taken easily as it involves others' lives.
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, the public needs to change their low-class-minded mentality, thinking that the
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 carried by the
police
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 will scare people. That
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 thing will not happen in
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 millennial era, as it is just a mere metaphor.
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,the function of
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 is sole to ensure that
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 will be physically and mentally prepared for the worst scenarios, none other than that.
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, it is undeniable that
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 will make folks scared but it is not effective on those criminals. Logically thinking, they have
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 the weapons to protect themselves. In conclusion, it is crystal clear that
police
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 must carry their
guns
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 everywhere, as well as other weapons. I think it is a privilege of being a
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 officer, and
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, they hold a huge responsibility for the citizens' lives.
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