Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

Although

It's true that features that people are born with are so important, and have various effects on their personal traits, there are many other factors that can influence

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personality

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experiences, family, and a school's atmosphere.

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this

idea. The innate characteristics could create

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aspects of

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character before she

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in

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a society.

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, They can shape

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behaviour structure of each person.

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people

poeple

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people

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with

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or active behaviours, and they can be creative or noisy in their childhood.

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, these maternal features can affect

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interests. Many children from

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age are interested in a certain colour or toy.

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, they are not unchangeable aspects of personality, and they can

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developed by many factors. In my opinion,

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are three main areas that can have enormous influences on people's character.

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, Family would play a crucial role in creating

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the personality

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of each individual.

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to affect

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their children

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and change their basic features by acting and repeating a certain behaviour.

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school

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shool

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school

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environment could have serious effects on pupils. It can enhance their morality and create new habits.

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, many situations that people have experienced in their life can change them significantly. For

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instance

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, experiencing a sad moment can change all your basic identity like

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being happy, active, and normal. In conclusion,

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are many elements that could have

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on somebody's character, but I think

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society,

atmospheres

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atmosphere

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, and

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experiences have influenced them more greatly than their maternal aspects.