Today’s society is based on laws and rules. It can’t function well if individuals are free to do whatever they want. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that modern
society
has plenty of
regulations
. Some people are convinced that they are significant
for
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a well-organized
society
. While someone may disagree, I believe that
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and rules are helpful
to
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managing citizens in
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society
. Some reasons are put in place why
regulations
are vital.
First
of all, they let people know what they can do or not. If
everyone
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carries
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a weapon,
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society
will be extremely dangerous for common people. Since human life is very fragile. If a man
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shot, he will die due to bleeding soon.
Therefore
, there is a law which bans citizens from owning guns and other lethal weapons.
In addition
, the laws and rules provide us
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standard of punishments. If a person breaks the laws, he will be judged according to the
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. It assures that
everyone
is judged
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the same standard and
give
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justice to
everyone
even a criminal.
Nevertheless
, I would have to agree that
society
may function well without
regulations
. If
everyone
can control their
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and stop violence, it is possible to pursue a better future without government and
regulations
. More resources can be put into the development of the technologies.
Moreover
, more
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scientific
scientifc
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scientific
achievements can be made. Since the money can be saved in the field of making and studying rules and laws.
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, it can be spent
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developing technologies and studying science which
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to a better life
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each individual. In conclusion, it is possible that
society
can work and function as usual without
regulations
, but I believe the existence of
regulations
does contribute to a well-organized and peaceful
society
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • legal framework
  • public order
  • societal harmony
  • enforce laws
  • deterrence mechanism
  • social contract
  • bounded by regulations
  • personal freedom
  • ethical standards
  • societal values
  • moral conduct
  • civil liberties
  • restrict individual freedom
  • law enforcement
  • jurisprudence
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