In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is true that more and more individuals prefer to read online without paying. Printed
newspaper
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and
books
may be replaced by electronic ones. While someone may disagree, I believe printed newspapers and
books
still have a chance to be maintained. There are some reasons why printed newspapers and
books
can still be maintained. One of them is that printed materials are more confidential than
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electronic ones. If a
book
has some details of a secret program, it should be read by some specific members. It should be printed and
preseved
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preserved
presented
in a certain place
insteading
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instead
of reading online and copying from one person to another. What is more,
although
buying printed materials costs me more money, it
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the writer earn what he deserves. Only when he earns enough money for
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can he write
such
a wonderful
book
again.
Nevertheless
, I would have to agree that online reading has some advantages. It is easier for me to get
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access
of
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a
book
. In the past, I have to search for several
book stores
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to find a particular
book
which I need for a
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research
reaseach
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.
However
, the internet can provide a soft copy of many kinds of
books
and it saves me a lot of time.
In addition
, the cost is much lower. Sometimes the
book
is shared freely by
other person
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. Everyone can have
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access to it if they can surf the internet. In conclusion, while reading online does have plenty of benefits, I am convinced that
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printed materials like newspapers and
books
should
be still remained
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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