You read an article in a magazine recently which might be useful for you and your friend's job. Write a letter to your friend and say -Describe an article and its content, explain why it is good for you, why would it be helpful for your friend?
Dear Anna,
How have you been? I hope
this
letter finds you in good health and wealth. I am writing this
to inform you that the importance of short breaks in between long working hours. I have read an article
in a famous magazine called "Vanita health". Actually
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,Actually
I
was fascinating.
The Correct pronoun usage
it
article
is written by Dr.
James he is one of the famous neurologists in Ramagiri hospital , in that he said that nowadays most Change the punctuation
Dr
of
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apply
the
people have a Correct article usage
apply
sedementary
life Correct your spelling
sedimentary
sedentary
especially
after covid pandemic we have Add the comma(s)
,especially
a remote
Correct the article-noun agreement
a remote work model
remote work models
work
models. Sitting in front of a computer for a long time can cause detrimental effects on our brain eventually deprivation of neutrons may occur, hence
it would develop a condition called dementia.
When I read the article
I have
became scared because both we are spending a lot of time Unnecessary verb
apply
Correct your spelling
in front
infront
of electronic gadgets for our Correct your spelling
in front
work
. Instead
of lengthy work
he has been advice
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advised
take
a short Fix the infinitive
to take
work
then
relax for 5 minutes. For relaxing he suggests several activities like listening to music ,brisk walking ,meditation so on . I think the Correct word choice
and then
article
is very useful and I Will share a copy along with the letter. Kindly go through
.
I Correct pronoun usage
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am look
forward to meeting Change the verb form
am looking
from
you.
With love ,
Krishna.Change preposition
apply
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,