You read an article in a magazine recently which might be useful for you and your friend's job. Write a letter to your friend and say -Describe an article and its content, explain why it is good for you, why would it be helpful for your friend?

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Dear Anna, How have you been? I hope

this

letter finds you in good health and wealth. I am writing

this

to inform you that the importance of short breaks in between long working hours. I have read an

article

in a famous magazine called "Vanita health".

Actually

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,Actually

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was fascinating. The

article

is written by

Dr.

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James he is one of the famous neurologists in Ramagiri hospital , in that he said that nowadays most

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the

Correct article usage

apply

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people have a

sedementary

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sedimentary

sedentary

life

especially

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,especially

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after covid pandemic we have

a remote

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a remote work model

remote work models

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work

models. Sitting in front of a computer for a long time can cause detrimental effects on our brain eventually deprivation of neutrons may occur,

hence

it would develop a condition called dementia. When I read the

article

have

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became scared because both we are spending a lot of time

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in front

infront

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in front

of electronic gadgets for our

work

Instead

of lengthy

work

he has been

advice

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advised

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take

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to take

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a short

work

then

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and then

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relax for 5 minutes. For relaxing he suggests several activities like listening to music ,brisk walking ,meditation so on . I think the

article

is very useful and I Will share a copy along with the letter. Kindly go

through

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itthrough

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. I

am look

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am looking

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forward to meeting

from

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you. With love , Krishna.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

213 words

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