Write a letter to your friend giving some advice. In your letter • include websites you recommend • say why you recommend them • give some other ideas which you think may be useful

Dear Arvind, How are you doing ?
Last
week, during our college meetup,
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heard that you were looking for some good websites to keep yourself updated on the world's
news
. I would like to recommend
you
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a few websites, that
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have been personally using. I get my daily dose of the latest
news
from www.cnbc.com. I have to say, they have
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great coverage across the globe covering all major
news
domains
such
as politics, economy, sports, health and entertainment. I would
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recommend it to you as they have an amazing research team on economics and business, providing the freshest feed on it. You being an
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entrepreneur
entreprenur
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entrepreneur
yourself, would find it very much useful in your startup journey.
Although
, they are not so great in sports and
hence
I would alternatively recommend www.yahoo.com for
sports
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news
feed.
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, you being a major football fan, I don't know if you ever visited www.fifa.com. In case, you haven't, I suggest you should. I am pretty sure, you are going to love it. I hope you would find my suggestions useful. In case you want to discuss more, you can buzz me anytime on my phone (+91-9820116717). Hope to see you
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our
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Alumni meetup in spring. Warm Regards, Anirban
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recommendation
  • usability
  • content quality
  • unique features
  • beneficial
  • educational platforms
  • productivity tools
  • travel guides
  • mobile apps
  • practices
  • current situation
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