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To solve the problem of traffic congestion govt should provide free public transport 24*7. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Arguments about whether the government should supply free public transportation in order to tackle congestion on the road have been becoming a debatable matter. As far as I am concerned , I am in favour of the idea that providing public
transport
 by authorities can prevent
this
 issue . On the one hand , the truth that can not be denied is that today with the increasing population and exponential growth of urbanization, the transportation needs of the people have increased rapidly pace and
this
 leads to the problem of bottlenecks which are a common and global problem around the world, the main cause is lack of investment or funding for infrastructure in the form of high-capacity public
transport
 and increased road space for private vehicles.
Moreover
, many governments ignore the shortage of transportation hubs which can provide huge space for cars as well as integrated road and rail facilities which could connect private and public ones.
this
, in turn, definitely results in traffic jams in many conurbations.
Furthermore
, people who migrate from the hinterland and settle in urban areas caused overpopulation which is the primary reason for congestion.The only way to solve these issues is indeed to prevent the above problems
Conversely
, it is true that implementing public
transport
 can bring favourable outcomes to the metropolitan cities as they could result in the reduction of private vehicles on the roadway which is the main origin of traffic jams.
In addition
,
this
 helps to minimize hazardous fumes and other dangerous chemical particles that are emitted into the atmosphere from cars at the maximum level. To sum up, taking into account the above factors, I believe that governments should improve lane infrastructure
in addition
 to providing free public
transport
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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