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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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By observing current media trends, analysts have noticed that crime novels and dramas are gaining more popularity in the past decade.
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 could be due to many reasons
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 as the recent rise of criminal activities and
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 levels
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 society. Let me elaborate more on these reasons
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why I would discourage
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 trend. Considering the recent blockbuster movies and most sold novels, one could easily classify these highly sold creations as
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 evolving around murder, theft, corruption and other criminal activity. Most companies, authors and directors create these plots to fit
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to
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the younger
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 generation around 18-35 years old while the demand for these types of creations has drastically increased over the past few years. In my opinion, one reason could be because many children/
people
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 get to witness highly corrupted governments day in and out in their lives. Their idols and
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 they look up to
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 become individuals promoting violence. Governments praise criminally offensive
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 and place them at higher rankings in society.
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,
people
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 tend to follow their leaders inspiring
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them to
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 watch more movies and read books based on criminal plots.
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, I
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 believe that
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 of advice and guidance given to children could
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 lead youngsters in following these types of
stories
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. Some
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 might find their own contentment in these movies/books as a way to release their stress and
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 enjoy the torturous scenes.
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, some
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 might have depicted good morals emphasizing
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how criminals are always brought
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to justice.
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, discouraging
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 from outbreaking
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 offensive acts. Yet, all in all,
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 impact
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 society out weights the positivity criminal
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 could bring
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minds
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, which directly affects
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 and the progress of a country.
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, I thoroughly discourage
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watching
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from watching
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 and promoting criminal novels and TV dramas.
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  • intrigue
  • enigma
  • compelling
  • addictive
  • chilling
  • forensics
  • procedural
  • thriller
  • suspense
  • psychological
  • criminalistics
  • deviant
  • intricate
  • red herrings
  • misdirection
  • sardonically
  • socioeconomic
  • catharsis
  • moral ambiguity
  • multidimensional
  • protagonist
  • antagonist
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