Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some
people
believe that artists
should have a right to express their thoughts in many ways, while others disagree with this
. In my opinion, artists
should be free to express their ideas in a way that they do not affect society
negatively.
These days, most people
agree with freedom and human rights. In other words
, all people
have a right to live in any way that they want , and to express their opinions without any restrictions. Most well-known celebrities have positive effects on societies. In fact, they try to post educational and inspiring videos on their social media in order
to increase some virtues among people
. For instance
, some musicians post some videos and songs on their Instagram in order
to decrease animal teasing in society
and to encourage people
to pay more attention to animal rights.
On the other hand
, there are some famous artists
who are not positive role models in a country. In other words
, some young rock music bands tend to pierce their tongue or nose and have tattoos on their eyes which may be harmful to their body. It is likely that their eyes hurt. Also
, these behaviour are not acceptable by families. They are opposite to society
's norms. Some teenagers look up to them and try to copy them. In these cases, governments should legislate some rules in order
to control artists
.
To sum up, although
artists
should have a right to express their ideas in society
, they do not have to have a bad impact on people
. In my view, artists
should be controlled by the governments in order
not to encourage people
to do harmful deeds.Submitted by atoosa_1398 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite