Marina has just started a new course at college and her tutor has asked her to write him a letter telling him something about herself
Dear MR.Joe I am writing
Add the comma(s)
,
the
letter to you regarding that e-mail you sent to me and ask me to tell you about myself. My name is Marina AK .l born Correct determiner usage
this
in
September 12 Change the preposition
on
in
1980.I am a dentist.I am married to Doctor Taha and I have two Change preposition
apply
child
Tawfik and Change to a plural noun
children
mousa
.My Change the capitalization
Mousa
fevort
book is Correct your spelling
favourite
dental
book and My Add an article
a dental
the dental
fevort
sport is football. I have Correct your spelling
favourite
many
hope in my life ,Replace the quantifier
much
first
one is Add a comma
first,
pass
the new course with Fix the infinitive
to pass
we
. Change the pronoun
us
Second
one Change the article
The second
is has
Change the verb form
has
high
degree in that course. I have Add an article
a high
dream
to become Add an article
a dream
famous
doctor in my career. I have good Add an article
a famous
experionce
Correct your spelling
experience
about
root canal treatment .Change preposition
with
otherwise
,I have good knowledge about how I dealing
with patients . My dream is to create my Wrong verb form
deal
privet
clinic. Correct word choice
own privet
Further
help all Add a comma
Further,
patient
in my city. I Fix the agreement mistake
patients
am look
to your response to my letter. My faithfully, Taha Change the verb form
am looking
ABdul
Correct your spelling
Abdul
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.