Marina has just started a new course at college and her tutor has asked her to write him a letter telling him something about herself

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Dear MR.Joe

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letter to you regarding that e-mail you sent to me and ask me to tell you about myself. My name is Marina AK .l born

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September 12

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1980.I am a dentist.I am married to Doctor Taha and I have two

child

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Tawfik and

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.My

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favourite

book is

dental

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book and My

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sport is football. I have

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hope in my life ,

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the new course with

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high

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degree in that course. I have

dream

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to become

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doctor in my career. I have good

experionce

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experience

about

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root canal treatment .

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with patients . My dream is to create my

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clinic.

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help all

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in my city. I

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to your response to my letter. My faithfully, Taha

ABdul

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Abdul

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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26Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

145 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Marina has just started a new course at college and her tutor has asked her to write him a letter telling him something about herself

Structure your letter

Your manager has asked you to arrange a party for a colleague leaving the company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter •suggest a suitable date and time for the party •recommend a venue •propose the food and entertainment options that should be available.

Government should spend money on railway rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Does internet need to be controlled by the government?

Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.