Foreign visitor should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people argue that international tourists are supposed to pay more than native travellers for visiting historical monuments.I partially agree with

this

view,as now will be discussed. It is

first

necessary to acknowledge that there are,indeed,native

residences

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have

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to pay a

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worthwhile

worthwile

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worthwhile

expense to preserve national attractions through the tax system.

Therefore

,it is reasonable that

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foreigners should pay a higher amount of fee than locals.

In addition

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tourism is the more devastated the historical constructions are.

As a result

,the local administration

need

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to collect the

diffirence

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difference

cost

from aboard visitors to conserve and renovate the facilities of

tourist’s

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attractions.

For instance

,the

singapore

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government

goverment

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government

applied the lower

cost

for

domestic

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population for entrance

ticket

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in

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every

destinations

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.

On the other hand

, foreigners

already

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prepared for their trip

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budget

buget

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budget

such

as the

cost

of travel, accommodation, food and buying souvenirs.

Thus

, exceeding the

cost

might dissuade them from travelling.

This

cause a noticeable decrease in tourism and a significant source of income which impacts badly

to

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the

country

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economy. One

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explanation

explaination

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explanation

for

this

is that

,

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less

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tourists will make

a

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numerous hotels and restaurants to be closed

then

the unemployment rate rise dramatically.

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, foreigners complained that the travelling charge in Vietnam

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way

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much more than

other

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southern

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asian

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countries like Thailand,

Cambodia

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so they decided to travel

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to others

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others

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countries in the area

instead

so

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Vietnam lost

a

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large profitability in

this

field in 2016. In conclusion, it would be judicious to make the oversea tourists pay more than natives but it could be an

ineffiency

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inefficiency

step for the

country

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benefit if it is inconsequential

controlled

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and controlled

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by the authorities.