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In the past, many people had skills such as making their own clothes and doing repairs to things in the house. In many countries, nowadays, skills like these are disappearing. Why do you think this change is happening? How far is this situation true in your country?

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, technology is used to keep up with the ever-changing
in
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industry.
Conversely
, nowadays making their own
clothes
 and doing repairs to
things
 in the
house
 skill are disappearing by the
people
. There are some points of view
as
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below.
First
 of all,
people
is
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easily
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 to accessible for the
clothes
 in the shop. Fashion
shop
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shops
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 are
in
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everywhere, it is not difficult to purchase
the
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clothes
 in somewhere. H&M,
Zara
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 those brand price is affordable for every
people
, even for adolescent, shopping is one of their entrainments.
Therefore
,
according
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this
 point making own
clothes
 is not important
by
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people
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mindset
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mind set
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.
Furthermore
, the
processing
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 of making
clothes
is complicate
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, because all the
people
is
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 busy, not plenty of time to do that.
In addition
, not only for making their own
clothes
 is disappearing, but
also
 doing repairs to
things
 in the
house
 skills are disappearing. Personally, Father usually
role
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for
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of
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 master of
house
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a house
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 who repair a lot of the
house
things
,
such
 as
change
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changing
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 the light bulb,
use
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using
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electric
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an electric
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 drill to get a hole
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to hang
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hang
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hanging
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 up the shelf etc...
However
, recently Father’s no extra time because they are busy
of
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 work every day. Much more the family can hire the workers to come home to repair easily and cheaper,
then
 they no need to do repair by themselves.
To
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 conclusion, disappear making their own
clothes
 point is
people
is
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are
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easily
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easy
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 to accessible for the
clothes
 in the shop. And doing repairs to
things
 in the
house
 is
easily
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easy
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 to find workers.
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