The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The line graphs give information about owning household devices and the period of the house working in a country between 1920 and 2019. The data are presented in percentages and the number of
hours
. Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the percentages of the number of electrical appliances owned by families
, had continually increasing
, Change the verb form
increased
while
the hours
of houseworkers obviously diminished.
Looking at the first chart, the vacuum cleaner using
was 30 Wrong verb form
used
percentages
and forty out of Replace the word
per cent
hundred
Correct article usage
a hundred
families
owned the
washing machines in 1920 Correct article usage
apply
which
the refrigerators were the rare appliances at that time. Just after twenty years, almost half of Correct pronoun usage
apply
Add an article
the household
household
had three types of electrical divides in their home. After six decades, all Fix the agreement mistake
households
families
owned their washing machine
and vacuum cleaner items Fix the agreement mistake
machines
by
certainly rose from 1920 and remain stable until 2019. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, people who
bought refrigerators approximately 70% which slowly but sustainably increased in 2019.
Moving on to the Correct pronoun usage
apply
second
chart, with the increasing number of electric appliances owned by families
, their demand for doing household work for example
, cleaning, washing clothes and preparing meals decreased with
50 Change preposition
by
hours
working a week in 1920. Finally
, it gradually dropped to only above 10 hours
per week.Submitted by fai6436 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, families with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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