The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The line graphs give information about owning household devices and the period of the house working in a country between 1920 and 2019. The data are presented in percentages and the
number
of
hours
.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the percentages of the
number
of electrical appliances owned by
families
, had been continually increasing,
while
the
hours
of houseworkers obviously diminished. Looking at the first chart, the vacuum cleaner used
was
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30
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and forty out of a hundred
families
owned washing machines in 1920 and refrigerators were rare appliances at that time. Just after twenty years, almost half of
households
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had three types of electrical divides in their home. After six decades, all
families
owned their washing machines and vacuum cleaner items certainly rose from 1920 and remain stable until 2019.
Moreover
, the
number
of people who bought refrigerators was approximately 70% which slowly but sustainably increased in 2019. Moving on to the
second
chart, with the increasing
number
of electric appliances owned by
families
, their demand for doing household work,
for example
, cleaning, washing clothes and preparing meals decreased
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50
hours
working a week in 1920.
Finally
, it gradually dropped to only above 10
hours
per week.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, hours, families with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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