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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit Write at least 150 words

#house #friend #visit
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Dear
khalid
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Khalid
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, I
write
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that
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this
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 letter to
informe
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inform
 you that,I have moved to
new
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a new
the new
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house
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 in our city . I have
leaved
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left
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 my old
house
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since
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for
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 three
day
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days
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. I know,you have many questions about that and you
need
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need to
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 explain
for
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apply
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it.
Firstly
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,My old
hous
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house
 was small and far from my job.
Scondly
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Secondly
, here is not barking for my car.
Otherwise
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, My new
house
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 is
wid
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wide
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 and near to my clinic. I have privet parking
to
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for
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 my new car too. My neighbours are very nice and polite. There are many
caffes
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cafes
 and restaurants beside the home. I would like to see you because I miss you and I hope you
to
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visit me in my new
house
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. Do not forget to bring
you
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your
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 wife Har and your children Mousa and Tom .
I m
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I'm
 looking forward to your calling . With best wishes , Taha Abdul
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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