You travelled by a long-distance bus recently and your suitcase was damaged. Write a letter to the bus company. In your letter, inform the bus company of when and to where you travelled describe your suitcase and what happened to it explain why the company should pay for a new suitcase

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Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that my
suitcase
was damaged by your
company
.
Firstly
, I would talk about my bad experience with your
company
. I travelled from Mumbai to Ahmedabad on 27th July 2022
in
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your bus. I heard your
company
's service was very good. So,I decided to start my journey with your
company
. I am disappointed with your
company
because of your service and staff members.
Secondly
, My
suitcase
was very expensive and it was near to my heart because it was gifted by my parents. It was an
Aksher
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Akshar
company
suitcase
and purple in colour. It is not easily available in my country. I put my
suitcase
in the luggage space and it was broken very badly because, of your staff members. They put heavy things
on
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my bag.so,it was damaged.
Lastly
,I want a new same brand
suitcase
by your
company
because it was broken by your staff members mistake. You can understand my side . Hoping for
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feedback. Yours faithfully, John
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