Your friend has just moved to a new house. Write a letter to your friend and let him know about the gift that you have prepared for him/her. In your letter, you should Describe the gift Tell how it will be delivered Explain why you chose it.

Dear
my
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friend Ahmet Hi Ahmet how are you ? I want to talk about you a lot. ı have not seen you before
lastly
but ı saw
of
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my house near yesterday. I bought a
gift
last
week when you moved before. my
gift
is
a
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big and awesome . The
gift
which is big and awesome is a computer which is very fast and smart. As you know , The computer is
a
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expensive and special
gift
. when ı came to your home , ı want to you it. My brother is very handsome and he sometimes
cry
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so you
are so be
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careful
please
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. I look forward to catching up with you soon. Yours sincerely Furkan Oz
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