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The quality of computer language translation has improved significantly in recent years. Therefore it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

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In recent years, computer technology has advanced significantly. Now we can communicate with people who speak different
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 with the use of computer translation software. Despite the development of these useful resources, I disagree that children should not learn foreign
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, because learning another language cannot only help an individual better understand their language but
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 communicate on both personal and cultural levels.
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, learning a foreign language is often a helpful way to get a better insight into one’s accent.
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, from personal experience, I found that learning Italian was useful in the acquisition of more vocabulary in my native expression: Spanish. While
computers
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 can help translate Spanish into Italian, if I had exclusively used
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 to translate for me, I would not have gained
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 knowledge of my own and other
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, like English and German, which
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 share some similar word formations. In
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 way, learning foreign
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 has many advantages beyond just communication.
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, computerized translation software can help people translate foreign text or even converse with a person who speaks a different speech, but
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 cannot communicate on a personal or cultural level.
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, one of my closest friends speaks Italian as a
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 word. We could consult our
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 to have a conversation, but our conversations are richer and more interesting when we attempt to communicate by actually speaking to each other.
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, we can share the different aspects of our cultures and home countries, the taste of our native dishes and the expressions unique to our local dialects, all things which our
computers
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 cannot do. In conclusion, I disagree with a community that believes that computer translation is sufficient for communication between the public who speak different
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. I believe children should be taught foreign
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 to broaden their knowledge and to help them communicate with people of other cultures.
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