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An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

#friend #holiday #region #information #advice #offer #clothes
Dear Ahmet I am writing to reply to your letter immediately, and ı heard that you wanna stay in my city. In
this
 ,letter ı will mention where you can stay anywhere and ı give you some advice. As you know, I live in
Istanbul
 and
Istanbul
 is the biggest city
of
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 Turkey. there're many
places
 that you can stay
, but
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in, but
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 some
places
 are terrible and dangerous ,so you can't stay in these
places
. I wanna suggest
in
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kavacik because
this
 area is clean and a safe area.
In addition
, almost every people know
English
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 language, and you can agree with them. there're many historical
places
 in
Istanbul
 and ı think you must go.
Furthermore
 ,
the
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Istanbul
 has many different seas where you can swim.
However
, you've to be careful because some people are so dangerous. If you come in summer, you've to bring fresh and cool clothes.
However
, if you exist in winter , you must wear a sweater and coat. When you come to
Istanbul
, I will have already missed you. I look forward to catching up with you soon. Furkan Oz.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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