Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.What are the advantages and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

It is certain that there are many

tourists

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prefer

to visit some

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extreme

conditions

places

like the Sahara desert and the Antarctic in the present day. While

this

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tourists

to widen their horizons, it may put their

life

in

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places

without survival skills.

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. On the

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hand, travelling in those special regions under hard conditions

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travellers to broaden their horizons,

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enhance their awareness of

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. For

Antarctic

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trip, people have to join a local cruise trip, there are many different experience staffs including biologists, geologists, and undersea specialists onboard. They will share their knowledge and insights

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wildlife, landscape and local culture via various presentations. Travellers not only can learn different

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knowledge

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also

able to see a

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life

during their trip if they were lucky. There is

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that it provides another channel for

tourists

to know

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another side of our planet. They

also

can see how

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is affected by human activities.

On the other hand

, people could be dangerous if they didn't follow local

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guides. Some travellers love adventures, in

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of self excitement, they tend to travel those difficult and inaccessible

places

. They are most likely to get lost,

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meat

or touch mysterious and

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species, resulting in

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their

life

.

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,

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Sahara desert, hard to find a specific building or landmark in the area,

people

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are easily lost their direction even

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have a map. Not to mention those who lack

of

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experience could be killed under the extreme temperature between day and night in

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. In conclusion, visiting difficult circumstances

places

can help

tourists

expand their

horizon

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.

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Nevertheless

, if they are not following local professional tour guides or instructions, they could be at the

egde

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edge

age

of danger and harmful their

life

.