Write a letter to your neighbour who is having animals in his/her garden. You and your family members are having problems with the animals - introduce yourself - tell the problem - suggest solutions

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Dear
Mr.
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Jones, I am Angelica Sumampong,
me
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and my family just recently moved in
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to your
house
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a week ago and I'm writing a complaint letter to you regarding
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the cats and dogs you have in your
house
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.
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of all, I'm not sure if you are aware, but some of your cats are going inside the
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and
try
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to get some of our
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foods left
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the table. it doesn't bother me that much but the thing is, they
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leave a mess in our kitchen, their footprints are all over
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the top of
table
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and it adds to my workload for the day.
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, your dogs, It's probably a routine for them to roam around in your garden to poop or do a lot of
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. One thing I realize in
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neighborhood
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is that the fence
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small where it's just to my waist level. It greatly bothers me that they can easily jump over the fence and poop on our garden. I want to suggest to you that every night you secure the cats in your
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and make sure they can't get out. As for the dogs, I suggest that you put a leash on them
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you let them out in your garden. I hope you find the time to reconsider my suggestions and I look forward to catching up with you. Yours truly, Angelica
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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