Write a letter to your neighbour who is having animals in his/her garden. You and your family members are having problems with the animals - introduce yourself - tell the problem - suggest solutions

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Dear

Mr.

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Jones, I am Angelica Sumampong,

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and my family just recently moved in

to your

house

a week ago and I'm writing a complaint letter to you regarding

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the cats and dogs you have in your

house

First

of all, I'm not sure if you are aware, but some of your cats are going inside the

house

and

try

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to get some of our

left-over

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foods left

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the table. it doesn't bother me that much but the thing is, they

also

leave a mess in our kitchen, their footprints are all over

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the top of

table

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and it adds to my workload for the day.

Secondly

, your dogs, It's probably a routine for them to roam around in your garden to poop or do a lot of

exercise

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. One thing I realize in

this

neighborhood

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is that the fence

are

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small where it's just to my waist level. It greatly bothers me that they can easily jump over the fence and poop on our garden. I want to suggest to you that every night you secure the cats in your

house

and make sure they can't get out. As for the dogs, I suggest that you put a leash on them

everytime

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you let them out in your garden. I hope you find the time to reconsider my suggestions and I look forward to catching up with you. Yours truly, Angelica

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

237 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to your neighbour who is having animals in his/her garden. You and your family members are having problems with the animals - introduce yourself - tell the problem - suggest solutions

The Closing

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