Globalization is positive for economies but its negative sides should not be ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is
Add an article
a well
show examples
well known
Add a hyphen
well-known
show examples
fact that globalisation has financial advantages for
Correct your spelling
countries
countiries
Correct your spelling
countries
.
However
Add a comma
,However
show examples
without a
doubt
Add a comma
,doubt
show examples
it has some negative sides to our world. In my opinion, positive facts of globalisation
is
Change the verb form
are
show examples
Correct your spelling
beneficial
benificial
Correct your spelling
beneficial
for us but we should not forget about it is impact and find the balance. In
this
essay
Add a comma
,essay
show examples
I will discuss both views and give
potential
Add an article
a potential
the potential
show examples
solution
Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
show examples
.
Firstly
, globalisation has developed
Correct your spelling
recently
recnetly
Correct your spelling
recently
thanks to new technologies and transportation growth. Nowadays
business
Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
show examples
can collaborate
successefully
Correct your spelling
successfully
with each other globally.
For instance
,
Submitted by kadirov.sattor755 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: