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Some people think that sports contribute to peace building internationally. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #sports #peace
The pie charts show the numbers and percentages of
men
 and
women
 in both full-time and part-time
employment
 in the UK in 1988 and 2012. Overall, we can see that all numbers increased but there were significant differences in the proportions for each year.
Firstly
,
although
 the
number
 of
men
 in full-time
employment
 was largest in both years, the greatest change was in the
number
 of
women
 working full-time.
This
 increased from 4,482,000 in 1988 to 7,696,000 in 2012. These changes can be seen in the percentages of the total workforce; in 1988,
women
 in full-time
employment
 made up only 19% of working people, but
this
 increased to 26% in 2012. As well as the
number
 of people working full-time, the
number
 of people working part-time
also
 increased, with
women
 being the largest
number
 in both years: 5,268,000 and 5,979,000, compared with 1,550,000 and 2,131,000 for
men
. In conclusion, apart from female full-time
employment
 and male part-time
employment
, percentage figures decreased between the two years. Most significantly,
men
 working full-time dropped below 50% to 47% in 2012.
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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