In many places new homes are needed,but the only available space for building in the countryside.But some people believe that it is more important to protect countryside and not build a new home there.What is your opinion about this,give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own experience or knowledge.
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place
building
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the building
a building
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. But some people believe that it is more Use synonyms
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significant
significiant
to preserve the Correct your spelling
significant
countryside
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countryside
, but we must preserve them for future generations.
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countryside
. There are numerous animals and habitats in our country. We cannot ruin their lives and habitats. Do we have pity on animalsUse synonyms
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, it would ruin the natural balance. Use synonyms
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illness
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trees
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a new
house
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the countryside
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house
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the countryside
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are
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protective
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a disaster
disaster
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disasters
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a flood
flood
. if we ruin them Fix the agreement mistake
floods
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disaster
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is
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unpresentable
unpreventable
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.
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drawbacks
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preserving
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countryside
. Correct article usage
the countryside
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stunning
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running
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and building a new Use synonyms
house
. Use synonyms
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