Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There is a certain school of thought who argue that

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graduating from the

university

offers the best opportunity to acquire a rewarding career while others suggest that being experienced and developing soft skills is more paramount.

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essay shall endorse the latter notion,

however

, the two divergent views shall be outlined after which a feasible conclusion shall be drawn. On the

one

hand, securing a

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job is

one

of the enormous reasons people claim a

university

degree is essential.

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is because certain positions in an organisation require highly

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training and knowledge which can only be gained through intensive studies. Admittedly, if individuals should graduate from

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university

, it will go a long way to help them secure a better career.

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, it has recently been published that , in Ghana, for

one

to earn from five thousand cedis onward, the person should be a degree holder.

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youths to

further

their education. .

On the other hand

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is

one

main reason others believe experience and soft skills is crucial. A key reason for

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is that

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there are some skills that can only be attained through years of

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.

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graduating from the

university

will help, that

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they may be

inexperience

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t0

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certain

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given

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a recent survey conducted by the food vendors association indicates that

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chefs who had no formal training

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better than those from

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vocational schools.

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is

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a result of constant practice over time . In conclusion, after assessing higher education and practical experiences, it is key that both are needed for

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successful employment,

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experiences should not be overlooked.