You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area explaining the problems suggesting ways to help the situation proposing a possible meeting Write at least 150 words

#area #neighbours #situation

Dear

neighbours

, I have written that letter to discuss the

problem's

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problems

problem

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with the parking area. Recently,there are some of the

neighbours

have more than a car and

also

to have a truck that why we have not enough space in our garage. In the

first

place,I would like to explain to all my

neighbours

that, each apartment has one parking for one car.

Secondly

, some

neighbours

have put old things .

In addition

, some children's bicycles .For that, I ask them to take out it of the garage.

Thirdly

, some

neighbours

do not stop on the right line and sometimes take a place for two cars .

Also

,I hope all respect the right of others.

Finally

, I hope all my

neighbours

to accept my invitation on WhatsApp to arrange with each other a good time for all to meet in my home to discuss all problems that we have met until now. With best wishes, Taha Tawfik

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

10 paragraphs

156 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Some people say that all people should stay in full-time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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