In the future, it is difficult for humans to live on earth. Some people think more money should be used to on the researches on how people can live on other planets, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The difficulty of the survival of humanity on

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generates the debate of whether we should be more financially supportive

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studies of other planets for humans to migrate to by its enormous impact on the fate of our species. There are supporters and

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, and I am one of the former. Admittedly, the

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disagreeing with the thought have their ground when there are other problems with more urgency.

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, it is not unusual

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see

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suffering from wars, famine and lack of access to shelters and clean water, as well as regions facing inadequate infrastructures,

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as poor hospitals and schools, whose development requires

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, too.

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, the importance of

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practice is much heavier. Without the

researches

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, we cannot reverse the trend of global warming, stop the destruction of

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earth

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, or find

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alternative planet to live on.

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, we can’t even live in poverty, we may extinct. The initial concerns should be protecting the

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while planet migration is the

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option in the worst situation. Studies

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renewable energy

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one to be carried out, attributed to its low risks and long-term influence of developing the new technology. The alternative solution

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could beIn the future, it is difficult for humans to live on

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. Some

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think more

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should be used

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on

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the

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how

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can live on other planets,

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as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree? studied is burying carbon dioxide underground, but

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theory has not been put into

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yet, leading to its unpredictability, and the requirement large amount of land and

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makes the practice

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for less than millenniums. The

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research about other planets like mars which may be suitable for us to survive is

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expensive but necessary. It is not hard to tell that it is probably the

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hope of humans, the species of ours, to keep our existence.

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conclude my words, in spite of other needs

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money

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,

researches

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should be considered

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for its unparalleled importance

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humanity.