Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phones, online games, and social networking Website. Do you agree or disagree?
With the development of today's technology, electronic
devices
have entered the house of each person, which has made people's life much easier than before. Children
have also
been massively exposed to these new forms of technology. However
, at the same time
, some parents
started to complain that it is harder now to educate their children
than it was before,
because their Remove the comma
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children
would always be playing with their cell phones or other electronic devices
. From a personal experience, I think it indeed has become harder for parents
to educate their children
now. My reasons are provided below.
First
, the occurrence of electronic devices
has made less time
for parents
to communicate with their children
. Educating children
has become harder due to distractions from electronic devices
. Now, children
spend more time
on cell phones than they could spend with their parents
, therefore
, there are
less Change the verb form
is
time
for parents
to talk with their children
. For example
, my cousin has a laptop that he bought while he was in school, whenever he was at home, he would spend most of his time
on his laptop and barely talk to his parents
. Only in times of eating food or family meetings
he would have Add a comma
,meetings
time
to speak with other family members. His parents
sometimes want to talk to him about his future career path, however
, he would have no time
because he was busy with
talking to people Change preposition
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from
the internet!
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Second
, the gaps between children
and their parents
have been widened with the occurrence of electronic devices
. Now, there are so many new things or concepts being invented and spread through the internet. Children
may have changed because of these new concepts. However
, Parents
may not know these things that have changed their children
's thinking, so they would find it has become harder to understand their children
, not to mention to educate their children
. Take an example of myself, sometimes I would encounter this
situation with my parents
as well. As a young person, I always use cell phones to learn the latest news or catch the latest trends in fashion. My parents
sometimes would comment on the style of my dressings, and then
we would have arguments about my outfit. The reason was they think I dressed too exposed and the color
was too odd. But, it was just the latest trend of the Change the spelling
colour
time
, I was just following the trend! The gap between me and my parents
has made it hard sometimes for my parents
to understand me.
In conclusion, based on the examples mentioned above, I think it is indeed more difficult for parents
to educate their children
today than it was before because of generation gaps and less time
from their children
that could be used to conduct quality communications.Submitted by 2457393307 on
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