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It is important for people to take risks both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do u think the advantage of taking risk outweighs the disadvantages.

#people #risks #lives #advantage #risk
In today’s background,
risks
 showed it significant role whether
in
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 professional lives or personal lives, some people might think taking
risks
 was a worse decision. At the same time, there were plenty of public considered it
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a
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great. Taking
risks
 has
huge
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 number of pros.
First
 of all, in certain cases, taking
risks
 is a shortcut for us to get success.
For example
, if a student who is studying
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master
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 degree in the university takes a mission that he could publish two
dessertations
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dissertations
 on SCI magazines in half of the year, he would be entitled
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vice professor.
Otherwise
, he would spend
at
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six years to get that title. Meanwhile, taking
risks
also
 stimulates a person’s potential, and strengthens people’s capabilities. As the example cited above, normally a scholar should spend
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a year to finish a
dessertation
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dissertation
 which meets the requirement of SCI, while that student takes the
risk
/ chance which
urgents
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urges
 him to complete
this
 impossible mission within six months. Under the pressure of taking
this
risk
, he gives out all his efforts to study and do experiments, with a fascinating outcome that he gets a great achievement on it and becomes a vice professor successfully. In his success, taking
risks
 takes a significant role. Everything has two sides, and there are some cons
of
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 taking a
risk
. The failure from taking
risk
 usually fight you down deadly and make you lose initial positive
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. Specifically, a merchant bravely invested
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risky project with 1.8 million pounds
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 and lost about 80% at the end.
Thus
, he does not have any money to fight back. Taking
risks
 influences a lot not only on a person, but the people around and surroundings, like a businessman who puts his partly three-fourths fortune into bets in various
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 nothing. So taking
risks
 is not that advantage as well. In general, considering the advantages overweight the disadvantages,
such
 as a poor businessman after a financial crisis, he carried on his way to take
risks
 insistently, outcome,he became a great successful billionaire.So having enough courage to face whether in professional or personal
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lives risks
risks
 are truly
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 for humanities.
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