It is important for people to take risks both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do u think the advantage of taking risk outweighs the disadvantages.

In today’s background,

risks

showed it significant role whether

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professional lives or personal lives, some people might think taking

risks

was a worse decision. At the same time, there were plenty of public considered it

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great. Taking

risks

has

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number of pros.

First

of all, in certain cases, taking

risks

is a shortcut for us to get success.

For example

, if a student who is studying

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degree in the university takes a mission that he could publish two

dessertations

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dissertations

on SCI magazines in half of the year, he would be entitled

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vice professor.

Otherwise

, he would spend

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six years to get that title. Meanwhile, taking

risks

also

stimulates a person’s potential, and strengthens people’s capabilities. As the example cited above, normally a scholar should spend

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a year to finish a

dessertation

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dissertation

which meets the requirement of SCI, while that student takes the

risk

/ chance which

urgents

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urges

him to complete

this

impossible mission within six months. Under the pressure of taking

this

risk

, he gives out all his efforts to study and do experiments, with a fascinating outcome that he gets a great achievement on it and becomes a vice professor successfully. In his success, taking

risks

takes a significant role. Everything has two sides, and there are some cons

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taking a

risk

. The failure from taking

risk

usually fight you down deadly and make you lose initial positive

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. Specifically, a merchant bravely invested

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risky project with 1.8 million pounds

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and lost about 80% at the end.

Thus

, he does not have any money to fight back. Taking

risks

influences a lot not only on a person, but the people around and surroundings, like a businessman who puts his partly three-fourths fortune into bets in various

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, ultimately,

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nothing. So taking

risks

is not that advantage as well. In general, considering the advantages overweight the disadvantages,

such

as a poor businessman after a financial crisis, he carried on his way to take

risks

insistently, outcome,he became a great successful billionaire.So having enough courage to face whether in professional or personal

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lives risks

risks

are truly

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for humanities.