The best way to improve standards in education I'd to ensure that class size are small. Do you agree or disagree

The best way to improve standards in
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is to ensure that
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sizes are small. Do you agree or disagree
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Many suggestions have been made to achieve better results with respect to
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, yet only
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seem to work. Some argue that
education
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quality can be improved by keeping the
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size
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small. While I think
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measure is sure to help raise the quality of
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, it is not without its downsides. To start,
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should consider some possible drawbacks to holding a
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for a small number of
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immediate concern is the costs of
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. Once the
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size
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shrinks, each remaining individual student should pay extra to make up for the cost that would
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be split among many other
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can particularly be problematic in areas where school funding is limited like private schools.
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other possible outcome is
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in student personality.
Students
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learning in relatively small groups of 3 to 5 tend to develop less social
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and do not get many chances to learn to work as a team:
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cannot be an exemplary citizen if they are not a good team player. Having said that, I support small
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sizes to attain better standards in
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. The
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reason for
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has to do with longer student-teacher interaction. Admittedly, once the
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size
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is down to, say 5, the teacher is able to give each student more of his/her time and attention.
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gives the teacher plenty of time to discuss
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content like homework and a new chapter for the day and a chance to find out more about their
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. More than just discussing assignments, time saved from not having to teach an oversized
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can be used to do additional classroom activities to
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hammer home concepts learnt in the
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. Considering both these benefits,
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class
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size
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is generally
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preferable, should
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wishes to boost
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quality. In conclusion,
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there are some problems associated with downsizing in the classroom, I am of the view that it is an advisable course of action as far as improving standards in
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