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Many people nowadays don't feel safe either when they are at home or go out .what are the reasons?what can we do to solve this problem.

#people #home
concerns about safety
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 rising among
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society whether it is about being safe at home or in public and the main cause of
this
 issue is
desire
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a desire
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 to attain materials and it can be alleviated by
enchancing
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enhancing
 awareness and a
sense
 of literacy in
general
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the general
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 public. the major cause of concern about safety is due to
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materialistic
materailistic
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a materailistic
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 mindset.As nowadays
people
 only
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focuses
focusews
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focus
 on obtaining
assests
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assets
 and in
this
 process they often get
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involved
invovled
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involved
 in the activities of crime.
For instance
,due to
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unemployment
unemployement
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unemployment
people
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do not
don't
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do not
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possess
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posses
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possess
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 the required funds to
fulfill
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their needs so in
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order
oder
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 to attain money for survival they commit crimes like theft and robbery . Along with that
people
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do not
don't
donot
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do not
 even have a
sense
 of security
at
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 their homes due to the fact that in
current
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 time caretakers as well as blood relatives commit severe crimes just to obtain the land mass
to
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get
handsome
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 amount of money.A crime report by
Indian
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the Indian
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 police department in 2018 stated that around 73 %
crimes
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of crimes
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 in
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Indian
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indian
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India
is
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 done to gain family money or profit
of
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from
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 land.
Hence
,
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materialistic
materials
materialstic
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a materialstic
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 mindset is the crucial reason behind the experience of unsafe surroundings.
On the other hand
 , in order to bring peace
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the
the
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of
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 the citizens, awareness campaigns could prove beneficial as
it
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they
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 will not only include a
sense
 of the precaution a person should have to avoid
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threatening
threatning
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threatening
 conditions. To
emplifey
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amplify
simplify
,
such
 educational programs about checking the background of work and criminal activities and taking proper
adress
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address
 and I.D proof before hiring a worker. Apart from that
people
 need to install CCTV cameras in their
residence
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 or at
workplace
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the workplace
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. So it can
can
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create a
sense
 of fear
being
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of being
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monitiored
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monitored
. The self
defense
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defence
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 is the other crucial trait that can save a person in
the
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 time of crisis.
By
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 these
solutions
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 a person can avoid being a
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victim
vicitim
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victim
. In conclusion ,
although
 the issues regarding safety
in
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at
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 home and outdoor
is
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 increasing due to
materialstic
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materialistic
 thinking yet
it
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they
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 could be eradicated by spreading awareness about
the
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apply
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preventive methods
such
 as self
defense
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defence
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,
doing
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 a background check.
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