In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. Do the advantages of such method outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays,

problem

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the problem

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of

traffic

jams is increased dramatically all over the world so

government

should take some actions against

this

problem

such

as increasing tax amount

also

government

start new routes ,improve

the

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apply

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roads and develop

transport

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the transport

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system. In

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essay, I would

benefits

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the benefits

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and drawbacks of

this

problem

. On the one hand , all over the world

traffic

problem

swelled rapidly , people buy personal automobiles for their personal purpose

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therefore

pollution

also

increased by

this

so that

government

would apply new rules to overcome

this

problem

.

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they apply

new

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tex rate to high prise cars and bikes

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therefore

people do not use their personal vehicles for going anywhere.

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, they

also

provides

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provide

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now buses , cars and auto for local residents

therefore

also

all nation overcome to

traffic

problem

and

also

declined in

pullution

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pollution

solution

.

On the other hand

, if

government

apply new rules so there are so many problems

come

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in

way

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a way

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such

as ,

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the prise

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price

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prise

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price

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of petrol and diesel increased and many folks

also

do not like to

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go

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going

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go

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anywhere from using

of

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apply

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buses

becuase

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because

they don't on time.

In addition

, people do not go

any

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to any

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place with

relaxness

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relaxes

relaxed

and joy . In conclusion, many countries

suffers

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suffer

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from pollution and

traffic

problem

so that's why if

government

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the government

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should apply

this

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these

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rules so surely they survive

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better

betterly

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better

.