Doctors, nurses and teacher make a great contribution to society and should be payed more than entertainment and sport celebrities. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that doctors, nurses, and teachers make a huge contribution to people and their income should be more than entertainment and sports celebrities. As i am concerned, I completely agree with the statement and

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essay will give several explanations that can be given below. Embark, there are benefits to raising the income of doctors, nurses, and teachers.

First

of all,

this

occupation has a crucial role in society.

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would mean that these

jobs

have to be provided higher income than other

jobs

.

For example

, doctors and nurses are necessary to cure people who get sick or have other diseases, and

also

deal with

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like accidents.

Secondly

, the other positive side of increasing the wage of teachers is to educate children to get knowledge and teach them how to behave in the right manner.

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would mean that teacher has

long-term

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impact on the student for the future and help them to have the ability in a particular job.

For instance

,

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student who

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have

tohave

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have

learned knowledge from their teacher often has a good

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in the future to get a job that they want because they have

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by the teacher in school. To sum up, I strongly believe that these three occupations have more important aspects for society compared with other

jobs

.

Therefore

, these

jobs

deserve to be paid more than others.