Some people believe the purpose of prison is to punish, while others would argue that rehabilitation is its primary role. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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across the world. There is a common belief that the aim of going to prison is punishment,

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, another panel of people think that spending rehab is its crucial function. In

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in the

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paragraph. On the one hand, it is true that one of the crucial

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of being put behind the bars is punishment due to the fact that criminals can face

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repercussions of illegal activities.

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the prison environment would create a proper situation to confront

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as a verdict. There are constant stories about the inmates can be

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consciously by undergoing difficult prison

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, so

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perpetrate again. As a consequence, facing

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punishment may be effective to change

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life.

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offenders

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compunction in terms of their crimes. Serving imprisonment can deter lawbreakers from committing

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criminal activities again because of feelings of regret.

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, according to the statistics of crime wave search websites in Vietnam, prisoners who have been released from imprisonment have more feelings of regret. As a consequence,

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jail, its environment can lead convicts to feel compunction.

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, rehabilitation behind the bars would cause

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to launch a new business. Provided that lawbreakers are involved in

rehabilitation

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a rehabilitation

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program

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, they will apparently learn an innovative skill to break into

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can be advantageous

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their community,

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more confidence by being

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. In conclusion, though one of the most important reasons

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sentencing

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jail is confronting criminals with their illegal actions, and

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of regret, rehabilitation can weigh up because of learning

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new abilities.