Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. DO YOU THINK THIS IS A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT?

Nations are becoming more and more equal as
people
can purchase the same goods anywhere
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all over the world. Personally, I believe
this
is a positive development for many reasons. ​
Firstly
, there is no dissociation in
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of
people
whether they are from developed countries or not. Every
people
can purchase the same
things
in their local states.
Moreover
, they can have the same opportunities and rights if they buy the
products
that are exported from other countries
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anywhere. After that, they can apply the same quality
products
although
these are made
from
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other nations
such
as Singapore, America and China.
Subsequently
, they become
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and learn
other’s
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cultures because there are some
things
that can show their tradition and cultures. And
then
, the communication between each other is
also
better by sharing their local
products
. ​
Secondly
, countries will not compete not only in business but
also
in living
standard
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. The trade between each country will be more developed and developed.
For example
, if they export their local
products
to another state, they will obtain imports from other
nation
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.
Consequently
, they have the same profit by exchanging their
products
. And
then
, their living standards will be similar as the
things
that they use in their daily life are the same as other citizens.
Moreover
, every country will have
the
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similar living standard and being anxious
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the future is becoming an unnecessary thing. ​In conclusion, states are becoming more and more similar because
people
can obtain the same
things
everywhere in the world. For the reasons that I mentioned above, I assume that
this
is
the
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positive development.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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