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You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter say who you are give details about the accident suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents

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Dear Manager, I am writing
this
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 letter to complain that I was injured in your supermarket. I went to your science city branch
last
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 weekend for shopping.
Firstly
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, I brought my household things
such
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 as shampoo, a toothbrush and many more.
Moreover
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,I went to a cloth section and there was water on the
floor
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. I slipped down on the
floor
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 due to water. I was in pain so, I went to the doctor and he said my ankle was cracked.
Secondly
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, you must put a signboard "wet
floor
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" at that place so people can walk with care.
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, you closed that section until the
floor
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 was not dried. So I decided not
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to come
tocome
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to come
your
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to your
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 supermarket until
favourable
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a favourable
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 reply. Hoping for
the
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apply
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positive feedback. Yours sincerely, John.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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