It is nowadays seen that many students are part-time employed. Discuss advantages and disadvantages

Nowadays, it is often seen in poor families that many pupils need to take a part-time job while they attend school. The reason for

this

situation is to help their families financial or maybe they want to find their own experiences, but it

also

causes less concentration on their studies.

This

essay will discuss

both

advantages and disadvantages based on my personal opinion which can be given below.

First

of all, one of the

first

benefits of

this

situation is that school

students

can give financial support to their families by taking extra time to be employed.

This

would mean that the student should manage

both

time

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times

show examples

for education and the job as well. Another benefit would be they might have a lot of experiences from an early age.

For example

, one of my friends going a teenage daughter who works nearby a supermarket in the evening, she shares one-

third

expanse with her family and reduces her father's burden.

in addition

, she

also

has experience in becoming an employee at an early age.

On the other hand

, there are

also

drawbacks for

students

.

To begin

with,

this

would make

students

control their time in

both

studying and working.

This

would mean that it would affect their studying performance because of the pressure coming from the workplace.

This

pressure can influence them emotionally, physically, and psychological of

students

.

For instance

, one of my mates from the school who takes a part-time job is having problems getting low marks in class because of the pressure coming from his boss.

This

would make him can not concentrate on his studies properly. To sum up, despite the advantages, there are

also

negative sides that should be concerned and it is important to keep balance in

both

studying and working.