Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is said that
people
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in
different ages and from different cultures can be gathered well by the Change preposition
of
music
. In my opinion, while it is true that Use synonyms
the
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apply
music
is a way to make Use synonyms
people
together, it cannot be regarded as a good way as it will not always gather Use synonyms
people
well Use synonyms
sometimes
badly.
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and sometimes
To begin
with, it seems to me that there are three main reasons that Linking Words
music
can bring Use synonyms
people
together. Use synonyms
Firstly
, Linking Words
the
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apply
music
is one of Use synonyms
ways
which can be used for simple conversation. Add an article
the ways
Secondly
, in most Linking Words
cases
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,cases
people
will feel happy when they hear Use synonyms
music
Use synonyms
,
so that they become willing to talk with others or near someone. Remove the comma
apply
For example
, it is around the vivid Linking Words
music
that I and my girlfriend fell in love with each other. Use synonyms
Finally
, Linking Words
the
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apply
music
is a kind of art, so Use synonyms
people
always want to discuss it with others when Use synonyms
Wrong verb form
appreciate
appreciating
.
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itappreciating
However
, Linking Words
the
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apply
music
will not always improve Use synonyms
positive
influence, Correct article usage
a positive
sometime
will lead to the happening of terrible things. Some Replace the word
some time
music
will Use synonyms
also
inspire the fighting Linking Words
eager
of someone or cause their unconscious to Replace the word
eagerness
scare
, which Add a missing verb
be scare
finally
may make them commit crimes. Linking Words
For instance
, soldiers will become extremely brave when hearing the battle cry. Linking Words
Furthermore
, why those bars or Linking Words
night
club are the area in which fighting Fix the agreement mistake
nights
incident
are most likely to take place. We all Fix the agreement mistake
incidents
known
Change the form of the verb
know
the
alcohol is blamed for it, but according to my Correct your spelling
that
knowledge
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,knowledge
the
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apply
music
is another important factor.
In conclusion, I insist that Use synonyms
music
not only can gather Use synonyms
people
but Use synonyms
also
promote those who have resentment Linking Words
with
each other to fight.Change preposition
toward
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