In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answers and provide relevant example and experience you might have.

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more opportunities than villages
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facilities.
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to live in big
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and
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opportunities.
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his level of information. There is no doubt that every person can choose
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where do you want to
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instead
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lecturer as well as
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some duties. To conclude,
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to me logical. In my opinion,
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find a job in
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. If they do not desire to live in
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Access to quality education and healthcare
  • Bridge the gap
  • Professional growth
  • Problem-solving skills
  • Adaptability
  • Freedom of choice
  • Job satisfaction
  • Incentives
  • Higher salaries
  • Housing benefits
  • Student loan forgiveness
  • Voluntarily
  • Community well-being
  • Local economies
  • Resources and infrastructure
  • Adequate support
  • Societal impact
  • Mandating
  • Rural populations
  • Professional development
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