In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answers and provide relevant example and experience you might have.
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numerous
centers
of educations and treatments, a number of people argue that Change the spelling
centres
teachers
and doctors
who are new started their jobs should go country-side for work
, whereas others think that nobody force where they work
. In
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this
essay, will be discussed each side of the topic and will be suggested a
idea.
On the one hand, Change the article
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no one
noone
would dispute the fact that large cities Correct your spelling
no one
supplies
more opportunities than villages Change the verb form
supply
such
as cultural activities, education locations, and medicine
facilities. Replace the word
medical
Therefore
, one can conclude that,
a lot of Remove the comma
apply
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people
pepople
have Correct your spelling
people
tendency
to live in big Add an article
a tendency
the tendency
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as well Correct your spelling
metropolis
metropoles
teachers
and Correct word choice
as teachers
doctors
in order to benefit it's
opportunities. Replace the word
its
For instance
, a young lecturer can visit museums in big
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a big
the big
city
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cities
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order
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order
enhancing
his level of information. There is no doubt that every person can choose Wrong verb form
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place
where do you want to Add an article
a place
the place
work
and live. Thus
, doctors
or lecturers can prefer to live in cities.
On the other hand
, in many nations new doctors
and teachers
employed
by Add a missing verb
are employed
government
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the government
instead
of working private sectors
due to conditions which are Fix the agreement mistake
sector
submited
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submitted
from
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by
government
. Add an article
the government
For example
, if a new teacher founded
a job in Wrong verb form
found
private
sector, he would Add an article
the private
work
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a teacher
the teacher
teacher
who Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
work
for Change the verb form
works
state
and Correct article usage
the state
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earn less than Correct your spelling
would
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public
puclic
lecturer as well as Correct article usage
a puclic
doctors
. Hence
, demanding work
for state
brings some Correct article usage
the state
obligation
like Fix the agreement mistake
obligations
workin
in Correct your spelling
working
rural
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a rural
the rural
area
because of Fix the agreement mistake
areas
govenmental
policy that it wants to boot degree of Correct your spelling
governmental
government
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the country-side
country-side
. Briefly, Correct your spelling
countryside
public
desire Correct article usage
the public
from
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apply
it's
own workers Replace the word
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executing
some duties.
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to execute
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because
beceause
of having acceptable Correct your spelling
because
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causes
courses
couses
, both arguments Correct your spelling
causes
are seems
to me logical. In my opinion, Change the verb form
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teachers
or doctors
who are
want to Unnecessary verb
apply
work
in cities with good opportunities should choose
find a job in Add the particle
tochoose
private
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the private
sectors
. If they do not desire to live in Fix the agreement mistake
sector
counry
-sides, they would not apply to public jobs.Correct your spelling
country
county
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