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Writing Samples
Band 4.5

You recently took a trip with a taxi company. The driver behaved in an unacceptable way and you had a lot of problems. You complained to the company but no-one has replied to your complaint. Write a letter to the taxi company. In your letter say why you are writing and how you feel explain what happened tell them what you would like them to do.

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Dear Sir I am writing
this
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 letter to inform you about some issues I had
it
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in
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on
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 my
trip
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.
First
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 of all, I took a
trip
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 from my location to
airport
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the airport
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 with driver Jon the owner of
the
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license number 110009 and it was
a
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the
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 worse
trip
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I
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than I
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had taken before.
Secondly
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, the
driver
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driver's
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behaviors
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behaviours
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 were not good specific
with
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to
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 me
such
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 as
slowdown
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a slowdown
the slowdown
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 in his speed,
skip
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skipping
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 a traffic signal and
spoke
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speaking
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a bad words
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a bad word
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with
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to
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 me and other people.
Which is
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Is
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 cause me late on my
fly
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flight
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trip
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 and lose a big deal in my own business
in addition
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 to that, he asked me to get out
from
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of
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 his
cars
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car
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 in
middle
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the middle
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 of the
trip
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. If you want me to forget all these problems and I do not take a serious steep to go police station so, I am asking you for 5000$ as a compensation for what happened or I will contact with
a
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relevant authorities to take an appropriate action
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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