Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house.

Dear Joe, How are you? It's been so long since we've contacted each other. Anyway, I'm writing to inform you that after working abroad for many years, I want you to know that I

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bought my dream

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two days ago. The

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has 3 bedrooms, 2 bathrooms and a garage, even though I don't have a car. Anyway, jokes aside,

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the kitchen is small the master's bedroom is what I like the most. It has a veranda where I can see most of the houses nearby. Speaking of my neighbourhood, most of them are elderly people and children, which is fine by me, since I don't like noise very much. We

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have security guards roaming around the place, which give me a breather and a Zumba activity every Monday to Friday morning. If you have spare time, you can come and visit the place, I'm excited to show you what my

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looked like. It might not be the same

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that I keep telling you about since we were kids but it's good for me. Looking forward to meeting you soon, Warm wishes, Angelica

angelica

Jul 27, 2022

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