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For all children, the ability to play a musical instrument is just as important as the ability to read and write”. How far do you agree with this suggestion? How important is it for a child to learn to play a musical instrument, in your view

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As reading and writing are important in a child's development,
music
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 offers many benefits at a young age. Teaching our kids to play any musical instrument will help them to develop different useful
skills
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 for life. In
this
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 essay, I will give two reasons why children should interact with
music
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 when they are younger.
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 of all, playing any musical instrument helps to develop kinesthetic
skills
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. Many studies affirm that having the ability to play any musical instrument keeps our brain strong in shape, and helps to avoid getting any disease
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Parkinsons
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 or Alzheimers.
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,
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 amps up children’s life expectancy.
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, kids not only develop discipline and patience through
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 but
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 improve their listening and attention.
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, with these
skills
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, it would be easier, later on, to take on any new hobby and practice it properly. In conclusion, immersing our kids in
music
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 when they are younger has tons of benefits
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 as developing essential
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 to put up with the challenges in life and be part of a better society.
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