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Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school. Others however say that corporation and teamwork in schools are more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#people #children #school #corporation #teamwork #schools
A section of society holds a belief that children need to be adapted
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competitive
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 in school.
On the contrary
, some opine that corporation and teamwork are more imperative during learning in schools. In
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both issues, as well as, my point of view regarding
this
 matter. On the one hand, school is the
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 institute in which
students
 acquire
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valuable
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valuable
 knowledge.
Therefore
, the authorities must
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ensure that
students
 are mentally and physically stable along their learning process. The community have to reset their low-class mindset, supposing that
competitive
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 environment will bring
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 to
students
. Parents cannot turn a blind eye to
this
 issue as it will cause
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 alarming impact
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their
thier
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their
offspring's
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On the other hand
,
students
 must practise themselves to work in a group, as well as not being selfish every single time. It is not only improvising their communication skill
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 but
also
 will make them realize the crucial of teamwork.
Accordingly
, it might be a bonus for them chiefly when they are trying to get an
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occupation
. Mostly, employers will look at
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 place in hiring their future employees. In
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conlusion
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, it is crystal clear that implementing
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social skill in children's education is more effective in school, albeit several
society
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 believes that
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 surrounding might be the best solution for
this
 issue. In my opinion, the authorities must take action on
this
 matter as soon as possible.
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