As major cities around the world are growing, so are their problems. What are these problems for young people living in cities? What are possible solutions for these problems?

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Young peoples are the most important asset to the community. The growing pace of the major cities is tremendous. Due to the developments, adults face major issues in employment and cost increases in their education but these problems are resolvable by the government, implementing policies for the young people as well as providing liberalisation in their education cost. Employment stability is not guaranteed for adults. A company have more options to hire anyone from another state because of the city development as well as
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will degrade the job opportunities for the young people.
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, my cousin was selected for the manager post in the food department but the company hired another person with more experience and older than him from another city. The government must look into the unemployment issues by the effect of city growth and implement a rigid protocol for the companies. Employment is always a basic right for adults and
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should be properly governed by policies from the government.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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